Rodriguez , Edith February 26,2009 Period 2/3 Eleven Eleven is an interesting short story written by Sandra Cisneros. This story is about a girl named Rachel and an old stinky sweater that did not belong to her ruined her birthday. Three reasons why Rachel credible is because first she feels like if she has all the ages inside of her. Second she started to cry. Last but not least she is shy to speak up to the teacher. The first reason why Rachel is credible is because she feels like if she has all the ages inside of her. What Rachel means is that sometimes she does stuff she did when she was four or three. That’s credible because Rachel said “ I’m eleven and it’s my birthday today and I’m crying like I’m three in front of everybody.” And everybody cries, but Rachel probably means we cried more when we were three. It’s still credible because everybody cries once in a while. Another reason why
February 26,2009
Period 2/3
Eleven
Eleven is an interesting short story written by Sandra Cisneros. This story is about a girl named Rachel and an old stinky sweater that did not belong to her ruined her birthday. Three reasons why Rachel credible is because first she feels like if she has all the ages inside of her. Second she started to cry. Last but not least she is shy to speak up to the teacher.
The first reason why Rachel is credible is because she feels like if she has all the ages inside of her. What Rachel means is that sometimes she does stuff she did when she was four or three. That’s credible because Rachel said “ I’m eleven and it’s my birthday today and I’m crying like I’m three in front of everybody.” And everybody cries, but Rachel probably means we cried more when we were three. It’s still credible because everybody cries once in a while.
Another reason why